Wow Marnie! Still, did you just get the part or did you just say "Could I be Nasty Phil?" Either ways, I think you could have done a bit more writing. But, if I could rate your writing it would be about 10/10! Keep it up Marnie, keep posting!
Hello Marnie,I just wanna ask why didnt you put any other parts of the play in all you said wa that you were nasty phil ad thats it I think next time you could do way more writing. Also Your didnt put in any of expresion and none of your friends that were in the play.
Wow Marnie! Still, did you just get the part or did you just say "Could I be Nasty Phil?" Either ways, I think you could have done a bit more writing. But, if I could rate your writing it would be about 10/10! Keep it up Marnie, keep posting!
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Thanks Sora,that was a very helpful comment,next time I will do more writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting Marnie! I'm glad it was helpful for you!
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Hello Marnie,I just wanna ask why didnt you put any other parts of the play in all you said wa that you were nasty phil ad thats it I think next time you could do way more writing. Also Your didnt put in any of expresion and none of your friends that were in the play.
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Thanks Aaliyah,what DID you like about my writing.
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