I am a learner at Westland High School in Hokitika, NZ.
hi Marnie!!! I really like your poem and the photo is amazing and I really like the words you have used it makes the poem more interesting Faith xxx
Thanks Faith! Your poem is great too!!!xxxx
Hey Marnie! Great Poem, it really describes how he feels when he's in peace and war keep up the great work! ☺☺☺
Thanks Kasha!!! Your poem is great too xxx
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
hi Marnie!!! I really like your poem and the photo is amazing and I really like the words you have used it makes the poem more interesting
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Thanks Faith! Your poem is great too!!!
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Hey Marnie! Great Poem, it really describes how he feels when he's in peace and war keep up the great work! ☺☺☺
ReplyDeleteThanks Kasha!!! Your poem is great too
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