I am a learner at Westland High School in Hokitika, NZ.
Marnie - great to see that you are beginning to understand how to write simple explanations. Using specific verbs such as 'pulls, sprays or pushes' helps your reader understand how the different parts of these tools work.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Marnie - great to see that you are beginning to understand how to write simple explanations. Using specific verbs such as 'pulls, sprays or pushes' helps your reader understand how the different parts of these tools work.
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