Hi Marnie! I just have a little mistake you made. You said that logging SHOULD be allowed in NZ when I think you meant it shouldn't because then, you have 2 opinions why logging shouldn't be allowed. Just a little heads up. Keep up the good work and keep posting!
You have bought up some great points against logging in New Zealand. I am wondering if you could extend them out a bit to really convince the reader that logging is not a good idea? Maybe you could have a wee think about the following things you could add to your argument: - What animals in New Zealand are being effected by logging? - Are there any facts/figures that support this statement? - What part about logging is ruining nature? Is it the machinery? - What could we do instead of logging in New Zealand? Is there a solution to the problem?
I like that you have given this activity a go Marnie - next time see if you can really extend your ideas so the reader will be engaged with your writing and fully convinced by your argument!
Hi Marnie!
ReplyDeleteI just have a little mistake you made. You said that logging SHOULD be allowed in NZ when I think you meant it shouldn't because then, you have 2 opinions why logging shouldn't be allowed. Just a little heads up. Keep up the good work and keep posting!
Hi Marnie!
ReplyDeleteYou have bought up some great points against logging in New Zealand.
I am wondering if you could extend them out a bit to really convince the reader that logging is not a good idea?
Maybe you could have a wee think about the following things you could add to your argument:
- What animals in New Zealand are being effected by logging?
- Are there any facts/figures that support this statement?
- What part about logging is ruining nature? Is it the machinery?
- What could we do instead of logging in New Zealand? Is there a solution to the problem?
I like that you have given this activity a go Marnie - next time see if you can really extend your ideas so the reader will be engaged with your writing and fully convinced by your argument!
Nga mihi,
Ellee :)