Dear Mum and Dad
My trip to Tundra was amazing It was really cold,colder than winter in new zealand.
I wore heaps of jackets and scarfs to keep me warm.I would go back to Tundra because I thought that it was so great,you can explore heaps of forests in Tundra.
From Marnie
Hi Marnie!
ReplyDeleteI really like your letter! I just have a question, what did you do there?
Hi Marnie!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really great start to your letter - In order for you to recieve full points you need to give me some more details in your letter which should be at least 5-6 sentences.
You also need to make sure that your opening: Dear Mum and Dad,
And your closing: From, Marnie
are on seperate lines, this makes your letter really clear to follow.
Some things you could think about to extend out your letter could be:
- How cold was Tundra? Was it colder than winter in New Zealand? Did you have to wear any special clothing to keep warm?
- Why would you like to go back to Tundra?
- What did you do/see while you were there?
- Was there anything you didn't like while you were there?
Hope to see your updated letter soon Marnie, I know it will be amazing!
Ellee :)