Saturday, 22 December 2018

SLJ-Activity 3- Day 5

1 comment:

  1. Hi Marnie!

    I really like the picture you have added to your post it is beautiful - Where is this?

    In order for you to recieve full points for this activity Marnie, you are needing to provide a little bit more detail in your description of New Zealand.
    Here are somethings that might help you to extend your writing:

    - Are there any similies or metaphors I could add to my writing? e.g. The creeks glisten like a starry sky.
    This can help the reader to piture what you are describing with greater detail.

    - Do you have a favourite place to visit in New Zealand that you could describe? Think about what you can: see, smell, hear, feel and maybe even taste at this place.

    - Is there something in New Zealand that you think is unique that people from another place may not know about?

    Looking forward to seeing what you come up with Marnie - I am sure it will be fantastic!

    Nga mihi,
    Ellee :)

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.