I really like the picture you have added to your post it is beautiful - Where is this?
In order for you to recieve full points for this activity Marnie, you are needing to provide a little bit more detail in your description of New Zealand. Here are somethings that might help you to extend your writing:
- Are there any similies or metaphors I could add to my writing? e.g. The creeks glisten like a starry sky. This can help the reader to piture what you are describing with greater detail.
- Do you have a favourite place to visit in New Zealand that you could describe? Think about what you can: see, smell, hear, feel and maybe even taste at this place.
- Is there something in New Zealand that you think is unique that people from another place may not know about?
Looking forward to seeing what you come up with Marnie - I am sure it will be fantastic!
Hi Marnie!
ReplyDeleteI really like the picture you have added to your post it is beautiful - Where is this?
In order for you to recieve full points for this activity Marnie, you are needing to provide a little bit more detail in your description of New Zealand.
Here are somethings that might help you to extend your writing:
- Are there any similies or metaphors I could add to my writing? e.g. The creeks glisten like a starry sky.
This can help the reader to piture what you are describing with greater detail.
- Do you have a favourite place to visit in New Zealand that you could describe? Think about what you can: see, smell, hear, feel and maybe even taste at this place.
- Is there something in New Zealand that you think is unique that people from another place may not know about?
Looking forward to seeing what you come up with Marnie - I am sure it will be fantastic!
Nga mihi,
Ellee :)